Song NO 1

Make my day
and lighten the load
treat me right
not wrong
I bet you're making fun  of my fate
Like a fire
is the fuse lit ?
how high to jump
I am so over you !
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February 17, 2024 at 10:28 PM
10CC wrote and sang the classic ' I'm Not In Love' about a guy who - despite the title of the song - was very much still in love. I may be very wrong but I sense echoes on a similar theme here Antony. I guess the beauty for poetry for me lies in the different interpretations people can have about a written piece. Thanks for sharing. Cheers - Gary
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