Notes About The Poem

Song


SONG
held close
in our hearts-

Only You sung at 
our wedding long ago
for our first dance together.

"Sixty-five years passed- still our song."


April 10, 2023

Pyramids 3--7 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 3:55:00 PM

ahhh, so wonderful and romantic. Congrats.

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/4/2023 6:15:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea! Hugs, Sandra

Joseph May

Date: 4/29/2023 4:37:00 PM

A song still holds precious memories, Congrats on your win Sandra

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/4/2023 6:17:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph for another great contest and my nice placement in your contest. I enjoyed working on my poem. Sandra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2023 4:34:00 PM

Lovely Sandra! Congratulations! My mom loved “The Great Pretender.” They made it to 61 before mom passed away.

Sandra Haight
Date: 5/4/2023 6:24:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kim, for your nice comment and congratulations. Yes, the Platter's songs we're very special in our time! Wonderful that your dear parents reach six decades plus of marriage- very special too. Hugs, Sandra

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/29/2023 2:47:00 PM

Sandra your song brought tears to m eyes, so beautiful. Congratulations on a wonderfully written poem. That song has additional beauty to me, my granddaughter once sent me a card from America ( I am in Australia) and when I opened it, it sang the words only you can make the world seem bright. The battery has died since but still sometimes I open it and pretend I can hear those words. Gosh I am crying now. Thank you for your beautiful poem. I share your love of that song.