song

hummingbird's soft song
wings fluttering melody...
hopeful breeze jealous
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Alhemaidy Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 11:29 AM
Lovely song!
Fowler Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 5:01 PM
i think you like this form (Haiku) A. ;) Thanks for commenting YF, :)
Sambourne Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Delightful. A Haiku of top quality. Be well. Brian
Fowler Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Thanks Brian. As always, I appreciate your visit and kind comments. :) Linda
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 9:39 AM
lovely imagery Linda I would love to see a hummingbird for real:-) hugs jan xx
Fowler Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 9:48 AM
Thank you Jan. Such beautiful little creatures and so entertaining. They are busy at my house this time of year.
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