Song

hummingbird's soft song wings fluttering melody... hopeful breeze jealous

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 2/10/2025 11:29:00 AM

Lovely song!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/10/2025 5:01:00 PM

i think you like this form (Haiku) A. ;) Thanks for commenting YF, :)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 3/6/2021 7:39:00 AM

Delightful. A Haiku of top quality. Be well. Brian

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/6/2021 8:40:00 AM

Thanks Brian. As always, I appreciate your visit and kind comments. :) Linda

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2020 9:39:00 AM

lovely imagery Linda I would love to see a hummingbird for real:-) hugs jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/24/2020 9:48:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Such beautiful little creatures and so entertaining. They are busy at my house this time of year.