Song

SONG

Oh! well you take a beat .....
Feel the rhythm from your head to your feet
Lay it down with a form and a meter
Bring alive with a  jive make it neater

And then you get some notes .....
Compose a melody that swings and floats
Put together in the major or the minor
Just one other thing could make it finer

You have a sound now - nice .......
Just add a little bit of flavour, give it spice
Get some words right for articulation
Sing them in this new delectable collation
              .....................

You can pass your laws and fight your wars
Lay a siege shut out by walls and iron doors
There’s one thing can penetrate the layers of stone
A single air sung  by gentle voice alone

With a song you have a magical creation 
With the power to devour a whole nation 
Bringing passion, joy and laughter, maybe tears
Deep heart resonance that echos down the years


3 January 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/12/2020 12:21:00 PM
Like your poet's take on the power of a song to conquer a nation, even the world. Ingenious and creative. Thanks, Geoffrey. :) gw
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/14/2020 11:02:00 AM
Thanks for your eloquent appreciation, Gershon.
Date: 1/10/2020 7:13:00 PM
this is a breath of fresh air. So original and so nice to read, Geoffrey. Congrats on the win.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/14/2020 11:01:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Andrea.
Date: 1/5/2020 11:08:00 PM
Geoffrey, your song is great, loved it _Constance
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/14/2020 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, Constance.
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