Son To Son

When I was but a youngster
In the folly of my day
I splashed around a swimming pool
Before I knew my way

The water quickly sucked me in
And I began to drown
I knew my life was over then
As I was going down

I must have made a mighty splash
As I was sinking fast
Although the wave that covered me
Was claiming me at last

I didn’t have a chance to say
Please help me if you can
I simply said goodbye to life
Before I was a man

Then suddenly to my surprise
My father pulled me out
He sat me on the water’s edge
As I began to pout

He didn’t pay attention
To the tears I must’ve shed
He didn’t seem to mind at all
That I was nearly dead

I know that he was teaching me
To think about my play
A father knows the dangers
That are leading us astray

Today I am a daddy
And my boy and I are one
We learn of life together
As we grow from son to son.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:14 PM
So endearing, Bryan. Keep passing the torch. (Don't let the swimming pool's H2O douse it! lol). Great write. Magic Moments, Gershon
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November 15, 2021 at 8:44 PM
Thank you for your sentiment. I'm not exactly drowning in comments. Yes, father and son learn from each other. Good thing, too. Yours truly, Bryan.
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October 30, 2021 at 2:23 AM
Love this Bryan and that last verse is truly moving and meaningful - beautiful! Belle
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November 15, 2021 at 8:45 PM
Thank you, Belle. That was very nice of you. God bless. Bryan
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