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Not for contest. 

*bully for him - express admiration or approval

 

 

Stupendous performance as a wrestler Owned his opponent; flipped to one’s back Naysayers criticised and duly tossed Showed he was confident; at One time he was bullied; now tough Naysayers soon find themselves looking up Showed up and out into his adulthood One of a kind; he’ll wrestle you with his tongue Naysayers all tangled up; bully for him

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Date: 5/4/2025 10:28:00 PM
Though bullied once, now he has grown so confident and a winner in life. It is a matter of pride and pleasure for every mother to see her children grow into winners. Beautiful acrostic poem, dear Kim.
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Date: 5/3/2025 6:06:00 AM
Dear Kim, such a powerful and triumphant portrayal! The journey from being bullied to owning the ring is truly inspiring. The way you showcase his strength—both physical and mental—really makes your poem resonate...Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2025 4:58:00 PM
Thank You, Maria!
Date: 5/3/2025 12:25:00 AM
A triplet of son acrostics. Your pride in him shines
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Date: 5/2/2025 12:25:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful/creative "Son" write. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2025 4:23:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 5/2/2025 10:27:00 AM
What an intriguing son you have, Kim—a powerful fighter with a fiery temperament and an impressive physique—
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2025 10:46:00 AM
Thank you! He was a 4 time state champion in hs and an all american in college. He worked hard and had the drive to do it.
Date: 5/2/2025 10:00:00 AM
Wow, so interesting- power in body and spirit, a warrior with a tongue too- :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2025 10:44:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/2/2025 10:00:00 AM
that's like you... <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2025 10:44:00 AM
You are so sweet!

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