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carrie had eyes so green
she was often very mean,
at home late at night,
her parnets would fight,
and thats the part no one had seen.

mistakes love and glitter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Singe Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 10:55 AM
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Woolum Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 6:33 AM
I like this a lot. Many people are in these shoes and it's sad that no one knows. <3 Great job.
Carroll Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 12:58 PM
wtf this is awsome but what does mistakes live and glitter mean and by wtf i mean what the fudge
Carroll Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 8:32 AM
awesomeness keep writing
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 8:50 PM
THis reminds me of the song about the little girl who died and nobody at school knew she was being abused. Well, this one is not so sad but similar!
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