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Somewhere, Someplace, Somehow

Somewhere the sun's shining Perhaps in your heart For the sky's gray and complaining From the very start Someplace laughter's ringing Perhaps in your ears For the streets are deserted In dread winter's fear Somehow hope emerges Could it be from your spirit? This lone voice calls out to you I'm so glad you can hear it January 09, 2019 STRAND SELECT 8, any form, any theme Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/15/2020 6:46:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/15/2020 1:17:00 PM
Thanks -- I went over the rainbow to write this. :) gw
Date: 1/11/2020 8:47:00 PM
LOVE THIS! So well written. Love how you tilted it. Adore the rhyme scheme. I love the idea of a lone voice calling from somewhere... perhaps far. But then. the spirit hears. NICE!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/11/2020 9:05:00 PM
Thanks for the enthusiasm, Edlynn, as well as for telling me what you liked about this one. Deeply appreciated. ~ Gershon
Date: 1/11/2020 1:50:00 AM
I think "hope emerges always from your spirit" - so this one spoke deeply to me.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/11/2020 9:04:00 PM
Thanks for the heartfelt comment, Caren. Blessings, Gershon
Date: 1/10/2020 8:09:00 AM
Really well written my friend. No snide comments here just awe at the wonderful poem you have posted.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/10/2020 11:09:00 AM
Aw, I so look forward to your humorous observations on my attempts at verse! ... At any rate, this time I really appreciate the sincerity of your endorsement for this poem. Very gratefully yours, Gershon
Date: 1/9/2020 7:43:00 PM
I always listen out for it Gershon, enjoyed your verse, good luck. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/9/2020 10:06:00 PM
Me, too. Tom. Laughter's the best medicine! Happy Times! ~ Gershon

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