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Somewhere In the Mist

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I left him somewhere in the mist that swirled around in sunlit haze. I can't recall last time we kissed, or where my heart was in those days when he and I were here, entwined together in a lover's knot. I left him in the mist behind— his kisses but a swirling thought.

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Date: 3/19/2023 7:50:00 PM
Well penned! I can’t tell if it’s joyful or sorrowful:)
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Date: 3/11/2023 8:22:00 AM
Oh the melancholy of lost love, so skillfully expressed here~
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Date: 3/8/2023 5:26:00 AM
Sweet memories, Katherine--delightfully portrayed.
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