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Somewhere Heavenly

Somewhere Someplace Far from here Someone is waiting Under the same sky Is he a Greek god? A mythical creature that it's just a fantasy? I remember Somewhere in my dreams Someone is calling my name Is he in the desert? Calling my name under the heat? Disrupted by heavenly oasis He is slightly maniacal, finally Is he on a mountain somewhere across the world? Looking from above He said the earth suddenly became so tiny Feeling a bit sentimental He just laughs it off He cried alone for some time Mumbling all by himself Like a wanderer from a faraway place He played his guitar that he loves so much Yes, he did remember He did remember We made a promise to meet again It all seemed absurd Yet for once, let's just let go of everything And stay together forever in our dreams I told you, I mean it this time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/10/2015 6:28:00 PM
FATIN, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Fatin Zaini
Date: 8/10/2015 9:52:00 PM
Hi again SKAT :) thanks for that. I really appreciate it.
Date: 8/10/2015 3:24:00 PM
Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2015 9:51:00 PM
Hi ! Thanks for that. I really appreciate it :)
Date: 8/10/2015 1:38:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Fatin! Great work!
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Date: 8/10/2015 10:33:00 AM
Hi thanks for that! :)
Date: 7/4/2015 2:36:00 AM
What a beautiful, romantic piece. I enjoyed the superb imagery and rate this a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/4/2015 2:38:00 AM
Thank you, really appreciated it. :)

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