Somewhere Heavenly

Somewhere
Someplace 
Far from here
Someone is waiting
Under the same sky

Is he a Greek god?
A mythical creature that it's just a fantasy?
I remember 
Somewhere in my dreams
Someone is calling my name

Is he in the desert?
Calling my name under the heat?
Disrupted by heavenly oasis 
He is slightly maniacal, finally 

Is he on a mountain somewhere across the world?
Looking from above
He said the earth suddenly became so tiny
Feeling a bit sentimental
He just laughs it off

He cried alone for some time
Mumbling all by himself
Like a wanderer from a faraway place
He played his guitar that he loves so much
Yes, he did remember 
He did remember

We made a promise to meet again
It all seemed absurd 
Yet for once, let's just let go of everything
And stay together forever in our dreams
I told you, I mean it this time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/10/2015 6:28:00 PM
FATIN, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Fatin Zaini
Date: 8/10/2015 9:52:00 PM
Hi again SKAT :) thanks for that. I really appreciate it.
Date: 8/10/2015 3:24:00 PM
Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2015 9:51:00 PM
Hi ! Thanks for that. I really appreciate it :)
Date: 8/10/2015 1:38:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Fatin! Great work!
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Date: 8/10/2015 10:33:00 AM
Hi thanks for that! :)
Date: 7/4/2015 2:36:00 AM
What a beautiful, romantic piece. I enjoyed the superb imagery and rate this a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/4/2015 2:38:00 AM
Thank you, really appreciated it. :)
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