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Sometimes the Dead

Sometimes the Dead by Michael R. Burch Sometimes we catch them out of the corners of our eyes— the pale dead. After they have fled the gourds of their bodies, like escaping fragrances they rise. Once they have become a cloud’s mist, sometimes like the rain they descend; they appear, sometimes silver like laughter, to gladden the hearts of men. Sometimes like a pale gray fog, they drift unencumbered, yet lumbrously, as if over the sea there was the lightest vapor even Atlas could not lift. Sometimes they haunt our dreams like forgotten melodies only half-remembered. Though they lie dismembered in black catacombs, sepulchers and dismal graves; though they have committed felonies, yet they are us. Someday soon we will meet them in the graveyard dust blood-engorged, but never sated since Cain slew Abel. Until we become them, O, let us steadfastly forget them, even as we know our children must.

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Date: 12/23/2019 1:08:00 PM
Upon further consideration after having visited and read the poem a number of additional times, I withdraw my "presumptuous" suggestion and now congratulate you once again -- the poem is very good just as it is and certainly needs no (nor would if profit from any) addition or alternation ...
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Michael Burch
Date: 12/23/2019 1:59:00 PM
First, thanks for taking the time to read the poem a number of times. Your time and attention are very much appreciated. I don't think your suggestion was "presumptuous" but I think astute readers will infer the "us" as you did. But in any case, I'm honored that you took the time to read the poem again.
Date: 12/15/2019 2:40:00 PM
Interestingly and talentedly crafted and just odd/unique enough to impel the entranced reader to the end and then through the whole of it again. Thank you for posting this. (Just a presumptuous suggestion, though: add "us" as the last word of the poem -- as I did mentally each time I read it.)
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Michael Burch
Date: 12/15/2019 7:33:00 PM
Thanks for taking the time to read the poem twice. I will consider your suggestion, thanks.

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