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Just to catch everyone up. I am doing well. My most recent film is presently doing the festival circuit and has garnered over 50 awards so far. This is a film I Produced and Directed. My next film is written/directed/produced by me. The poem I wrote is a rough draft and somewhat dark. Just what flowed out when I sat to write today. I’m on Facebook/Instagram/Twitter under my real name Armand Hamouth if you get the urge to look me up.

they’re sensitive my words
exposed wires
like veins hidden 
under the scars
of too many verbal attacks 
like swarms of vampire bats 
who puncture the night
turn the downpour red

you’ve never been able to stay on key
or open doors that needed one
like the beating one under your breast
with the rusted bars and the rusted lock

living in the city 
alone is your state of mind
where once you found 
the company to be friendly
where you could block those thoughts 
travelled in the dark memories of your existence 
and the only light was the bright white smile
you so casually hid behind
your casual stiff pose that fooled no one
not for a nickel or a dime

where glass although smoother than ice
cracked under your sharpened blades
it was there your pretty face resided
ugly and broken from that perspective 

until you pulled out 
your pencil and paper
until you placed people
and moved them
taught them to talk

saw something in that
for a little while you turned off the tap
suddenly attracted a crowd
one or two even saw beyond your guise
felt fine just to be you
for a length of time

before you fell 
on the pavement 
buried
in the concrete
oh too real

you were there
you were gone
and never regained your balance

life as easy as it comes
was too difficult 
couldn’t explain 
how you managed to grow old
sitting singular in your unlit corner 
where nothing came of your success 
or of your kind words
from your kind lips

and still kind

hopefully 

to the bitter end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/7/2019 11:10:00 AM
Another wow experience reading your words.
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Date: 8/1/2019 4:49:00 PM
I pray kindness always hugs your very core. You illuminate joy for all who read your raw talent. You never disappoint us readers. Thankfully you never shun from writing thought provoking writes. A fav.
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Date: 7/10/2019 7:15:00 AM
You have the worded flair that keeps us enthralled from beginning to end Armand. A wonderful read my friend. Thank you!
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Date: 2/14/2019 7:35:00 PM
So good, Armand. Your imagination is endless and you are doing so great. What is your movie's name so I can look it up?
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Date: 2/14/2019 5:07:00 PM
your free verse is exceptional Armand:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/14/2019 10:38:00 AM
Whew, beautifully intense.
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Date: 1/18/2019 1:28:00 PM
the 'night writer'...good write : )
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