Sometimes Lost

Seem I'll walk this road alone

             the time of never looming forever. shivers filter thru my bones,

                             yearning to be soothed by hushed tones.

                                Once happy, now shrouded in 
                                        
                                               misery

                          pondering my mental stockpile of uncertainty
                                                                     

                                       half smiles strapped in pain,

  choked up feelings of past privileges hoping to regain. tethered by unseen chains.


                       The soul feeling scarred, suppress , and under duress

     How......oh.... how do I break free from this sadness that envelopes me?

   Cascading down a mound of despair wishing this sadness will disappear,

                           relieving me of my desolations and fear

                      Where....oh....where is my guardian angel out there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Robinson Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 4:49 PM
I seldom enjoy rhyming poetry, but yours is so sell constructed and there wasn't this pervasive overtone that called attention to the rhyme. Very well done!
A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 2:33 PM
Hello Joan, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Williams Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 1:54 AM
Thanks Linda
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April 26, 2015 at 1:33 AM
joan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Williams Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 2:17 AM
Thank you SKAT I will
A   Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Hello Joan, sometimes I'm caught chasing my guardian angel. Love this poem,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
Williams Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 2:20 AM
Destroyer I thank you, yes I think I will enjoy the communiy
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