Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Sometimes It Rains On a Clear Sunny Day

At stroke of the dawn as the sun is rising
Birds are chirping to awaken the morning
From the trees that sway in gentle breeze 
Breeze that whispers melodic greetings

Greetings that convey comforting feelings
Taking a slow walk with musings alluring
Humming the tune of romantic lyrics
Lyrics that mesmerize a beautiful dream

A dream that allures and keeps her waiting
Embracing falsity when truth is illusive
Ignoring a warning that he's just a fantasy
A fantasy that culminates in futile reality

A futile reality she must now contemplate
Between real and illusive she now hesitates 
Not ever taking the blue-sky for granted
For sometimes it rains on a clear sunny day 

August 1, 2018
Placed first in standard contest #155 by Brian Strand

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Carole Duet January 7, 2019 at 9:06 PM Great poem, Vijay! Love it and FAVED. And, congrats on your win.

Carolyn Devonshire January 6, 2019 at 2:48 PM Your poem is beautifully penned, Vijay, and so worthy of its win in Brian's contest. Congratulations! Hugs, Carolyn

Line Gauthier January 6, 2019 at 10:24 AM Congrats on your top win, Vijay.

Brandy Nicole January 4, 2019 at 11:28 PM The title caught my attention right away, as I love everything about the rain. "Not ever taking the blue-sky for granted" I completely agree. Blessings truly are everywhere, even in the simplest of moments. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

P.S. Awtry January 4, 2019 at 10:13 PM I enjoyed the flow and structure of this well written piece. Congratulations!

Heidi Sands January 4, 2019 at 9:55 AM Congratulations for your beautiful win Vijay! :)

Eve Roper January 4, 2019 at 9:22 AM Congratulations on your win, Vijay. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*

Vladislav Raven October 22, 2018 at 10:47 AM Hi Vijay, your words express your message so well in this excellent write. Your creativity shines over and over in your work and this wonderful work is no exception. May your pen ever run gold. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Paul Callus August 24, 2018 at 10:44 AM Treading on the paths of fantasy, bypassing reality, fills only a momentary void. Best to keep our feet on the ground! Regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri August 6, 2018 at 10:44 AM Your talent is raining with beauty dear Vijay! You have an adept ink and a stunning imagination that allow you to shape your words into a striking wonder! The multiple use of your words is cleverly designed to create a unique write of art! You surely know that it's my immense pleasure to read your gripping poems.. Keep shining and Be blessed. Vijay Pandit August 6, 2018 at 3:31 PM You are so kind Besma..you bring smiles with your generous comments..your visits are always so pleasant..many many thanks.

Robert Lindley August 5, 2018 at 7:50 AM So many truly excellent verses and such a fascinating read... A gem my friend and a fav... Vijay Pandit August 5, 2018 at 3:38 PM Thank you Robert..your stamp of approval means a lot my friend.

Eve Roper August 3, 2018 at 11:25 PM With rainbows above, Vijay, beautiful imagery wonderful verse. Vijay Pandit August 4, 2018 at 7:02 AM Thank you Eve.

Connie Marcum Wong August 3, 2018 at 4:25 PM To have value for everything is a task but one with great rewards. Lovely Vijay! : ) Vijay Pandit August 4, 2018 at 7:02 AM Thank you Connie.

Nette Onclaud August 3, 2018 at 12:32 PM after the gust, a rainbow... your exquisite lines uplift, vijay... spill ink!..huggs Vijay Pandit August 3, 2018 at 3:15 PM Thank you, nette..a pleasure to read your feedback.

Charlie Smith August 3, 2018 at 12:10 PM Love the way you wove the form, excellent my friend... Vijay Pandit August 3, 2018 at 3:14 PM Appreciate your visit Charlie..many thanks for the kind feedback.

Mystic Rose Rose August 2, 2018 at 6:58 PM I am sure your lyrics will be just as beautiful Vijay, I'll be waiting,... Vijay Pandit August 3, 2018 at 7:44 AM Thank you Pixie.

Winged Warrior August 2, 2018 at 5:59 PM Sunshine all the way for you my friend...truly enjoyed Vijay...love & light...^WW^ Vijay Pandit August 3, 2018 at 7:44 AM Thank you WW.

Liam Mcdaid August 2, 2018 at 4:29 PM from the rain their we see the sunshine sparkle in your pen excellent verse vijay Vijay Pandit August 3, 2018 at 7:43 AM Thank you Liam.

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2018 at 4:17 PM Yes, I love when people use patterns in their poems!! (replying to your comment below) Thanks for reading my last poem. I'm waiting for a new one of yours to see Vijay Pandit August 3, 2018 at 7:43 AM Thank you Andrea.

Mike Gentile August 2, 2018 at 10:08 AM Your words are a true expression of some of life's intricacies and disappointments, Beautiful and well done Vijay !! Vijay Pandit August 2, 2018 at 3:54 PM Thank you Mike--appreciate your feedback, as always.

Andrea Dietrich August 1, 2018 at 3:28 PM yes, it happens all the time, Rain when we least expect it in our lives. So we can take nothing for granted. Great poem with imagery and metaphor! I like how the last line of each stanza was related to the first line of the next stanza. Vijay Pandit August 1, 2018 at 5:02 PM Thank you Andrea for noticing the pattern of the poem..I am trying to incorporate it more often where I can. Appreciate your visit and comments, as always..thanks again.

Mystic Rose Rose August 1, 2018 at 3:17 PM Sometimes we are so vulnerable that we choose fantasy over reality. Fragile beings that we are, we have a difficult time when the rain comes unexpectedly shading our sun, I love your humanistic poems Vij, thank you for sharing, and being here... Vijay Pandit August 1, 2018 at 5:00 PM I always enjoy reading your insights..happy with your visit and kind feedback.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 1, 2018 at 11:09 AM Your first verse an ode to nature and its inspiring beauty ! The rest of your writing a well-crafted poem expressing vividly the continuous fighting of emotions and alternating feelings! Superb my friend, Vijay! Vijay Pandit August 1, 2018 at 2:08 PM A pleasure to read your comments and insights..many thanks my friend.

Arturo Michael August 1, 2018 at 11:08 AM Many times it rains in pure sunshine...and light illuminates the darkness of our minds... A wonderful write Vijay...All the best Vijay Pandit August 1, 2018 at 2:07 PM Your insights are spot on my friend..many thanks.

Caren Krutsinger August 1, 2018 at 9:13 AM The second verse gives you away, you are a master at realizing what many people can never see. This is a terrific poem. Vijay Pandit August 1, 2018 at 11:07 AM Delighted by your visit Caren..you are very generous with your kind words.

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