Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Sometimes I Wonder

Sometimes I wonder  

Sometimes I wonder if she truly loves me,
then what I have done to deserve such a prize
I am not special, not someone so worthy
or smart as some others, at least in my eyes

Oh sure I can write about what I am feeling
in poetic form that will usually rhyme
Poems of love filled with sugary phrases
that tell her how happy I am she is mine

But there are so many who write words of wisdom
with thoughts stimulating in wonderful prose
Stanzas of life and the world all around us,
depth in their meanings, it certainly shows

Difficult subjects that touch us so deeply,
current events, many names in the news
Sadness and sorrow of friends and their passing,
realistic themes now expressing their views

While I write of fairies and peppermint kisses
in fantasy settings with sunflower dreams
Stardust and sunsets and magical places
with lily pads singing in clear mountain streams

What does she see in this heart of a dreamer,
who paints pretty pictures in whimsical weave
Writes everything with the happiest ending,
thinks in forever just past make believe

Sometimes I wonder if she truly loves me,
then what I have done to deserve such a prize
But I’ll just keep writing and hope she keeps reading
these phrases of love that I leave ‘fore her eyes

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Kim Rodrigues January 6, 2017 at 5:30 PM Lovely poem, Chris! Never cut yourself short! Words are quite alive! Chris Green January 6, 2017 at 5:32 PM Thank you again Kim. I appreciate your kind thoughts

Tatianna Leachet January 6, 2017 at 4:49 PM Such a beautifully written poem, I'm sure this makes her happy :) Chris Green January 6, 2017 at 5:08 PM Thank you so very much Tatianna for your kind words.

Nette Onclaud January 6, 2017 at 3:48 PM awwhhh, straight from a heart that is filled with charm and romance, chris... get that girl!..huggs Chris Green January 6, 2017 at 3:51 PM Thank you so very much Nette, your nice comments touch my heart.

Heidi Sands January 6, 2017 at 3:35 PM She is very lucky to have such beautiful writings to be read for her, Chris. Chris Green January 6, 2017 at 3:47 PM Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I truly appreciate all of the kindness you show me.

Eileen Manassian January 6, 2017 at 3:15 PM Whimsical and sweet as honey. I'm sure she loves this. Chris Green January 6, 2017 at 3:46 PM Thanks so very much Eileen, I guess we will see. : )

Tim Smith January 6, 2017 at 2:37 PM I'm sure she sees the depth of your heart Chris... Wonderful Chris Green January 6, 2017 at 3:45 PM Thanks so much Tim, I appreciate that.

Alexis Y. January 6, 2017 at 2:36 PM WoW! Chris, How can one read this and not be moved or touched. All who read you not only read your verse but experience it. I'm sure she does. Exceptional rhymes and content. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis Chris Green January 6, 2017 at 3:35 PM Alexis you are so kind to me, I appreciate you so much. Thank you for always bringing a smile to my face.

Daniel Turner January 6, 2017 at 1:41 PM Perhaps she see the same thing you see when you look at her. Beautiful poem, Chris. Your rhymes are the bomb! Chris Green January 6, 2017 at 3:31 PM Thanks so much Daniel. Coming from an amazing poet like you, that means a lot.

Charmaine Chircop January 6, 2017 at 1:11 PM I hope She is reading. We all yearn for our words to be read and mostly to be felt, by those We care for. You give her and us a beautiful dream, and who wouldn't love that. I always look forward to read you, Chris Green January 6, 2017 at 1:27 PM Thank you again and again my sweet friend for always leaving such nice and wonderful comments for me. I always look forward to your visits because I always seem to smile when you do.