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Sometimes I Forget His Name

Sometimes I forget his name there are cavities in love too dark gaps in the cracking heart where aching doubt and memories pulsate. © Gry W Christensen

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/26/2014 10:36:00 AM

very well expressed, my friend

Gry Christensen
Date: 11/5/2014 3:39:00 PM

Hello Jack! Thank you for reading and your positive comment! All the best, Gry

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/18/2014 10:48:00 PM

Some of the deepest wounds can never heal completely.... This is beautifully expressed, Gry. I really like this poem a lot. Nice work!.... Thank you so much for the lovely comments on my poem. I tried replying to them, but it's not working for some reason. I'm so sorry about that!

Gry Christensen
Date: 11/5/2014 3:39:00 PM

Hi Kelly, you are very right , the deepest scars will always remain open somehow. Thank you so much for reading and for your very kind feedback, much appreciated! All the best, Gry

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/14/2014 8:10:00 PM

excellent pen really so very true deep beautifully penned piece god bless

Gry Christensen
Date: 10/14/2014 9:10:00 PM

Hi Liam Many thanks for reading and your positive feedback. I appreciate it a lot. All the best, Gry

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/14/2014 7:17:00 PM

Nice one Gry! ;) Cheers! xxx D.

Gry Christensen
Date: 10/14/2014 9:03:00 PM

Hello Dorian Thank you so much, a hasty write scribbled down in the memory of a break up this. Thanks again for reading and commenting! All the best, Gry