Sometimes I Forget His Name

Sometimes
I forget his name
there are cavities 
in love too

dark gaps 
in the cracking heart
where aching
doubt and memories 
pulsate.


© Gry W Christensen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Horne Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 10:36 AM
very well expressed, my friend
Christensen Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Hello Jack! Thank you for reading and your positive comment! All the best, Gry
Deschler Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 10:48 PM
Some of the deepest wounds can never heal completely.... This is beautifully expressed, Gry. I really like this poem a lot. Nice work!.... Thank you so much for the lovely comments on my poem. I tried replying to them, but it's not working for some reason. I'm so sorry about that!
Christensen Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Hi Kelly, you are very right , the deepest scars will always remain open somehow. Thank you so much for reading and for your very kind feedback, much appreciated! All the best, Gry
Mcdaid Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:10 PM
excellent pen really so very true deep beautifully penned piece god bless
Christensen Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 9:10 PM
Hi Liam Many thanks for reading and your positive feedback. I appreciate it a lot. All the best, Gry
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 7:17 PM
Nice one Gry! ;) Cheers! xxx D.
Christensen Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Hello Dorian Thank you so much, a hasty write scribbled down in the memory of a break up this. Thanks again for reading and commenting! All the best, Gry
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