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Sometimes life can be as if you are living in a dream everything going smoothly life is just so very good Your days are filled with joy happiness seems a given your family and friends are all gathered round Yet here come the clouds every day reality intrudes small and large disasters begin striking taking toll Back down to earth we come learning to take good and bad moulding them best as can be not perfect as life seldom is

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/21/2014 3:05:00 AM
UpS aNd dOwnS ARE A PART OF LIFE, lets face it dear. Nicely written.
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Date: 11/27/2013 1:56:00 PM
Life is as you say! Good write Shadow!
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Date: 11/25/2013 10:08:00 AM
Yes life does have it's challanges sometimes. The bads make the goods that much more brilliant. How we react to the clouds will determine our overall contentment in life.
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:52:00 AM
very true Rick ty for your advice too Shadow x smile hug
Date: 11/24/2013 9:07:00 PM
oh yes, this one speaks volumes Shadow... sometimes life isn't as perfect as it seems...good write...I enjoyed this one and needed the read tonight :) hugs-
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:50:00 AM
hi Sandra then I am glad I wrote it if it helped you ty Shadow x smile hug
Date: 11/24/2013 8:16:00 PM
Thank you for the congrads, I wrote it for my son jared.
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:49:00 AM
hi Cherl he must be proud of you then Shadow x smile hug

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