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Sometime In the Future

The essence of u stirs my senses
your masculine smell leaves me defenseless
anticipating the moment until I see you again
reveling you and I together
there's no beginning and no end

were not perfect of that we know
but perfect we are together as our
emotions grow 

inhaling you with every breath that I take
slowing down my breathing
until the feel of you abates

I'll just be patient until you come to me
so until the time comes forth I'll wait patiently

P.S. THIS POEM IS JUST ABOUT
A FIGMENT OF MY IMAGINATION

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James Foulk

Date: 9/6/2008 11:06:00 AM

a beautiful gentle poem.

John Boak

Date: 8/15/2008 5:28:00 PM

if you always write like this about figments of your imagination then I would love to be a figment of your imagination...i truly love this poem...whoever you fall in love with should know that he is one lucky guy...a really good poem-john e

Sara Lokken

Date: 7/29/2008 10:03:00 AM

Wow, beautifully written, even if it is a figment of your imagination, lol. So well expressed. Regards, Sara:)

Angela Crabtree

Date: 7/24/2008 8:06:00 PM

Well, you had me going at hello. lol I have a feeling that will be a reality in the month of April. So, hold on, hang in and be patient and cautious. Excellent creativity and passion in this write. Peace, Ivy

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/24/2008 3:14:00 PM

Filled with yearning and so gently written. Well done. Regards Heidie

Leah Yoho

Date: 7/22/2008 2:29:00 PM

I know how you feel D. My guy broke up with me a few years ago, but we're still friends. Great Poem, keep it up. LAL (Love and Laugh,) Leah.