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Sometime In the Future

The essence of u stirs my senses your masculine smell leaves me defenseless anticipating the moment until I see you again reveling you and I together there's no beginning and no end were not perfect of that we know but perfect we are together as our emotions grow inhaling you with every breath that I take slowing down my breathing until the feel of you abates I'll just be patient until you come to me so until the time comes forth I'll wait patiently P.S. THIS POEM IS JUST ABOUT A FIGMENT OF MY IMAGINATION

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/6/2008 11:06:00 AM
a beautiful gentle poem.
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Date: 8/15/2008 5:28:00 PM
if you always write like this about figments of your imagination then I would love to be a figment of your imagination...i truly love this poem...whoever you fall in love with should know that he is one lucky guy...a really good poem-john e
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Date: 7/29/2008 10:03:00 AM
Wow, beautifully written, even if it is a figment of your imagination, lol. So well expressed. Regards, Sara:)
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Date: 7/24/2008 8:06:00 PM
Well, you had me going at hello. lol I have a feeling that will be a reality in the month of April. So, hold on, hang in and be patient and cautious. Excellent creativity and passion in this write. Peace, Ivy
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Date: 7/24/2008 3:14:00 PM
Filled with yearning and so gently written. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/22/2008 2:29:00 PM
I know how you feel D. My guy broke up with me a few years ago, but we're still friends. Great Poem, keep it up. LAL (Love and Laugh,) Leah.
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