Amy Swanson Poet Free verse

Sometime

Sometime
    by Amy Swanson, 2008



If you still think of me
      the way I think of you
              I wouldn't mind
                    if you just said hello...

sometime.



If you dream of me
      the way I dream of you
              I wouldn't mind
                    if you said you missed me...

sometime.



If you care for me
      the way I care for you
              I wouldn't mind
                    if you said you need me...

sometime.


but if you love me
      the way I love you
              I wouldn't mind
                    if we left all unsaid... until 

sometime.

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Denis Joe December 5, 2008 at 4:49 AM Beautifully put together. The language is great as it avoids going off into airy-fairiness. The flow of this is great and the way that each stanza is measured out and paced just right for the last, works wonders.

Carrie Richards December 4, 2008 at 8:46 PM I like the form, it makes the flow feel more intense! ~ Nicely done! Carrie

Raul Moreno December 4, 2008 at 6:52 PM Nice poem Amy, You have a way with structure and words...Raul