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Sometime

Sometime by Amy Swanson, 2008 If you still think of me the way I think of you I wouldn't mind if you just said hello... sometime. If you dream of me the way I dream of you I wouldn't mind if you said you missed me... sometime. If you care for me the way I care for you I wouldn't mind if you said you need me... sometime. but if you love me the way I love you I wouldn't mind if we left all unsaid... until sometime.

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Date: 12/5/2008 4:49:00 AM
Beautifully put together. The language is great as it avoids going off into airy-fairiness. The flow of this is great and the way that each stanza is measured out and paced just right for the last, works wonders.
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Date: 12/4/2008 8:46:00 PM
I like the form, it makes the flow feel more intense! ~ Nicely done! Carrie
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:52:00 PM
Nice poem Amy, You have a way with structure and words...Raul
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