Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Something Very Fishy Here

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A wish for a fish on a dish would be bliss
Though this bliss could be missed in a wishing dish fish
For a fish might go squish undercooked on a dish
So this wishing fish squished on a dish isn’t missed


1/13/20
For the Twist My Tongue Poetry Contest
Held by Nina Parmenter

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Jean Bush February 3, 2020 at 1:18 PM Say that 3 times with crackers in your mouth! Well done. Chris Green February 3, 2020 at 1:22 PM There'd be crumbs all over the floor if I did. :) Thanks for your comments today Jean. I appreciate all of your visits.

Richard Lamoureux January 24, 2020 at 9:15 AM Cute one, congrats on a fine win. Chris Green January 24, 2020 at 9:20 AM Thanks so much Richard.

Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2020 at 8:06 PM Reminds me of Dr. Seuss, one fish two red fish blue fish. Congrats! Chris Green January 24, 2020 at 9:14 AM Thanks so much Kim.

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 7:32 PM I really like your winning tongue twister, Chris. Congrats. Chris Green January 24, 2020 at 9:13 AM Thank you so much Andrea.

Sandra Adams January 21, 2020 at 2:40 PM I came back just to say congratulations on your win :) hugs Chris Green January 24, 2020 at 9:13 AM Thank you so very much my friend.

John Hamilton January 13, 2020 at 8:56 PM This is great Chris what an imagination you have...agree with Sandy's query...what can't you do? Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 7:31 AM Thanks my friend. Truthfully there are a lot of things I can't do and often just get lucky with poetry. But I appreciate your kind words.

Sandra Adams January 13, 2020 at 6:28 PM lol... what a fun little write... is there anything you can't do? humor, love, stories... your talent is never ending... enjoyed this one Chris...i needed some laughs tonight so thanks for that :) hugs Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 7:30 AM I can't speak Mandarin... : ) Thank you again Sandy. I can always count on you to bring a huge smile to my face.

Lindsay Laurie January 13, 2020 at 5:28 PM G'day Chris … fishy indeed. Really great tongue twister. Have you recited in public? You'd get tongues wagging - thanks Chris - Lindsay Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 7:30 AM Just recited it in my head Lindsay. : ) Thank you so much for reading and commenting

Gershon Wolf January 13, 2020 at 5:24 PM I think you've twisted my teeth with this one, Chris! Fun! :) gw Chris Green January 14, 2020 at 7:29 AM Thanks so much GW. Just fishing for a contest win. : )

Ronald D Thompson January 13, 2020 at 5:11 PM Totally cool Chris!! I'm suddenly in the mood for fish. Great tongue twister! Best wishes..Ron :) Chris Green January 13, 2020 at 5:13 PM Thanks Ron. Glad you liked it.

Heidi Sands January 13, 2020 at 4:03 PM LOL I laughed at the title to start, Chris. You are so creative. Well done :) Chris Green January 13, 2020 at 5:02 PM Thanks Heidi. This was a difficult one to even come up with. I am glad you liked it.