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Something Very Fishy Here

` A wish for a fish on a dish would be bliss Though this bliss could be missed in a wishing dish fish For a fish might go squish undercooked on a dish So this wishing fish squished on a dish isn’t missed 1/13/20 For the Twist My Tongue Poetry Contest Held by Nina Parmenter

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Jean Bush

Date: 2/3/2020 1:18:00 PM

Say that 3 times with crackers in your mouth! Well done.

Chris Green
Date: 2/3/2020 1:22:00 PM

There'd be crumbs all over the floor if I did. :) Thanks for your comments today Jean. I appreciate all of your visits.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/24/2020 9:15:00 AM

Cute one, congrats on a fine win.

Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2020 9:20:00 AM

Thanks so much Richard.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/23/2020 8:06:00 PM

Reminds me of Dr. Seuss, one fish two red fish blue fish. Congrats!

Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2020 9:14:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2020 7:32:00 PM

I really like your winning tongue twister, Chris. Congrats.

Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2020 9:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/21/2020 2:40:00 PM

I came back just to say congratulations on your win :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2020 9:13:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/13/2020 8:56:00 PM

This is great Chris what an imagination you have...agree with Sandy's query...what can't you do?

Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2020 7:31:00 AM

Thanks my friend. Truthfully there are a lot of things I can't do and often just get lucky with poetry. But I appreciate your kind words.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/13/2020 6:28:00 PM

lol... what a fun little write... is there anything you can't do? humor, love, stories... your talent is never ending... enjoyed this one Chris...i needed some laughs tonight so thanks for that :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2020 7:30:00 AM

I can't speak Mandarin... : ) Thank you again Sandy. I can always count on you to bring a huge smile to my face.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/13/2020 5:28:00 PM

G'day Chris … fishy indeed. Really great tongue twister. Have you recited in public? You'd get tongues wagging - thanks Chris - Lindsay

Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2020 7:30:00 AM

Just recited it in my head Lindsay. : ) Thank you so much for reading and commenting

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/13/2020 5:24:00 PM

I think you've twisted my teeth with this one, Chris! Fun! :) gw

Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2020 7:29:00 AM

Thanks so much GW. Just fishing for a contest win. : )

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 1/13/2020 5:11:00 PM

Totally cool Chris!! I'm suddenly in the mood for fish. Great tongue twister! Best wishes..Ron :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/13/2020 5:13:00 PM

Thanks Ron. Glad you liked it.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/13/2020 4:03:00 PM

LOL I laughed at the title to start, Chris. You are so creative. Well done :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/13/2020 5:02:00 PM

Thanks Heidi. This was a difficult one to even come up with. I am glad you liked it.