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Something That Was Promised

something that was promised in quiet moments when night creeps on toward its soft dawn bed I wonder why we agreed so long ago at this time to meet who were we then before blithe spirits silted from our mortal coils to lay in unknown churchyard or battle field what was our reincarnate pledge as sudden as a lightning strike some where beneath my ribs you came to me all swirling words and I knew you

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Date: 9/20/2017 2:16:00 PM
Such love. Wow
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/20/2017 5:56:00 PM
We talked about it,before he died suddenly, meeting afterward to carry on together. We have a date for the best cup of coffee in the universe.
Date: 9/18/2017 11:57:00 AM
The most enviable of all human traits - Faith! What a lovely pledge you speak of, Patricia. If you truly believe strongly enough...love "will" find a way. :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/18/2017 12:19:00 PM
Thank you John.
Date: 9/18/2017 8:57:00 AM
Wonderful piece Patricia. I do hope you are reunited xomo
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/18/2017 12:17:00 PM
thank you Maureen. I love lilacs and surrounded my house with them too.

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