Just go from good to excellent.
Something old, something new, usually heard at weddings. But not this time. Replace something old with something new. Perhaps that old winter coat with a new mink. Or those old shoes, with new boots. And maybe that sad dress with a bright color suit. Replace those old manners. I think not. For they are what got you where you got. But try something new for something old. It's worth doing that while you grow old.
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