Something Old Something New

Written for the contest “SOMETHING OLD SOMETHING NEW.” My original poem was written in 2017 as an epithalamium. The edit for John Lawless’  contest has become a rhyme.

SOMETHING OLD SOMETHING NEW

          1. Something Old

TO LIFE AND WEDDING NIGHT BLISS

To the BRIDE, To the GROOM ~
consumed by blushing love,
ardor of amicable affection.
OH the passion that waits
in your bedroom suite, sweet
Eden’s confection, a mixed elixir,
a tango of crystal turning two into one.

And perhaps the soft music
and the flickering candlelight
will bless your love on this night
in nine months time another life
will further sweeten up your home.

Oh mighty blush, how it stings
your young and innocent cheeks!
A kiss or two will do you good,
bid you goodnight but not adieu.
And you shall wake, all the rosier,
as we all giggle and gather for brunch.

We live through you two, in memories
or hopefulness, feeling your pulse,
beating with the grand affair of your hearts.

May your blessings be greater than your sorrows,
lasting what feels like an eternity. Okay we jest,
and smile between us married couples. Truly,
may you be blessed with gentleness, love,
adventure of bountiful years. In applause,
we lift our overflowing glasses
to the lovely BRIDE and blushing GROOM!
CHEERS!

9/19/2017
Epithalamium

          2. Something New

To the bride! To the Groom!

Bless your love-at-first-sight—
Uncovering of angel wings,
Soft music, flickering candlelight,
The bee’s delightful sting.

To the bride!  To the groom!
Infused with Eden’s perfection.
Blushing elixir of honey’d room.
Partake of conjugal confection.

Under the Hesperus unfold—
Oh the rapture released - heat
In Winter’s saturant cold.
Buoyant tango betwixt satin sheets.

To the bride!  To the groom!
In paradise, two become one.
May a miracle, performed in the womb,
Net you a daughter and son.

May your cornucopia hold passionate fruit.
In reception, our ardor pulse spreads.
Celebration lifts with joyous flutes.
Excitement reigns - our kingdoms wed.

9/30/2021
Rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations on this win. Both are very beautiful writes. Today, be blessed with your win...........
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 7:12 PM
Thank you so much, Paula! :)
Hawkins Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Both poems are exquisite. Good luck in the contest Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Shirley!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 12:16 PM
This is gorgeous Kim. I really cherish this part " We live through you two, in memories or hopefulness, feeling your pulse, beating with the grand affair of your hearts."
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Oh Wow! So beautiful! Both poems are exquisitely lyrical! You are a great poet, Kim. Love ~ Mala
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Thank you so much, Mala! xx
Strand Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 1:14 AM
Means so much Kim to our equivalent I notice
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Thank you, Brian!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 11:11 PM
You created a new poem with your changes. Best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 6:25 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Romios Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 1:05 PM
You are such a talented poetess, Kim Loved Eden’s Elixir line for one! Magic you are with a pen, Pangie
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 4:28 PM
I thank you so much, Pangie! <3
Seeker Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Spoilt for choice! Each better than the other but when the flag falls, I’d say old is gold!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 4:28 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
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