Something New

People buying something new
Can’t wait to use or try it,
Starting with the minute their
Decision was to buy it.

If it’s clothes or jewelry,
They’ll wear it right away,
Just to reaffirm it’s worth
The price they had to pay.

I’m a little different, though,
My wackiness unmatched;
My purchases remain unworn,
Their price tags still attached.

They languish in their shopping bags,
Most likely quite confused – 
Selected from the store, brought home, 
But waiting to be used.

I can’t explain the reason why
I have the need to wait;
At times, I almost reach the point
When things are out of date.

But soon enough I’m ready – 
It’s a feeling in my gut;
I’ll slip the item from its bag
And price tags will be cut.

You like my pocketbook? Me, too.
It’s nice you let me know.
It’s brand-new, even though I bought it
Fourteen months ago!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/27/2013 12:56:00 AM
Ilene, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Date: 11/17/2013 1:41:00 PM
Such a playful last refrain to surmise your intent. I guess maybe thats why some people always only rent. Peace. :)
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Date: 11/15/2013 10:45:00 PM
Another gem dear ilene. I too have clothes with tags / who knows how long they'll last / Including a brand new Nehru Jacket / A style that's long since past. p.s. I don't really have one. But I do have clothes in the closet with tags.
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Date: 11/15/2013 10:30:00 AM
OH DEAR SWEET ILENE! I am DEFINITELY not like you in this aspect. I have to wear it RIGHT AWAY! At times...I've worn the new shoes right in the store and walked out in them. It takes every kind, doesn't it? Loved this write. You are a sweetheart! No concept of delayed gratification in my book, my dear!
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Date: 11/15/2013 5:55:00 AM
This one me smiling in agreement-- lovely light verse on a topic we can all relate to--there is just something about 're-discovering' a packet.. an item with price tag still on :)
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