Something New

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I'm stranded on a sailboat 
in the doldrums of my mind,
but there's comfort within jail though 
when I know just what I'll find.

There's nothing new. Nothing new. 

You pushed me to the plank so
I knew I must sink or swim,
and I guess that I should thank you
for that's when I could begin

To be something new. Something new. 

My chameleon skin is shedding,
and I'm not sure what I'll be.
Is my compass bearing heading 
me to land or back to sea?

But it's something new. Something new.

My Phoenix form is rising like dirigible
towards the sun,
And there's something great or terrible 
in what I have become:

Something new. Something new...for you. 

10.16.18
Contest: Trying Something New

Boundary pushing rhymes: 
Sailboat / Jail though
Plank so / Thank you
Swim / Begin (less boundary pushing) 
Dirigible / Terrible
Sun / Become (boundary adjacent)

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Date: 11/5/2018 1:46:00 AM
Very unusual and engaging - I enjoyed this very much. Blessings and best wishes, Jesse - congratulations on your superb win in Nina's challenging contest, my friend, keep up the excellent work! :-)
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Date: 10/28/2018 5:55:00 PM
great rhyming Jesse, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/27/2018 12:09:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Jesse. Well done.
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Date: 10/27/2018 11:34:00 AM
Fantastic poem! :) Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 10/16/2018 2:09:00 PM
Good write Jesse, well penned with good rhyme too. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 10/16/2018 9:42:00 AM
Nicely done Jesse. This should do well in the contest
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