Gary Wayne Hill Poet Free verse

Something Lost

For the first time in seven and a half years
You truly disappointed me
For the first time in seven and a half years
I wasn't proud of you
And today you discovered that you
Didn't have the ally in me,
You perhaps always thought you had
Today we both lost something
Today we both lost that belief in each other
And I cannot help but feel
That things between us
Will never ever be quite the same again

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Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2013 at 12:12 PM - I am always looking for new "Luke" poem ... and forget to read the beautiful writing. - - Thanks for the nice photo on "my wall"! - You are always welcome to read my poems .... your choice .... - I have no new "Adrian" poem, could probably have written a lot about him too. - (There will probably be more ... lol) - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak June 28, 2013 at 7:46 AM Wonderful poem. You show relationships are never one-sided when it comes to success failure or blame.