Something Like

Something like bliss
I love this part
that sweet first kiss
was Cupid's dart...

Something like a dream
yet the pain is real
we let off steam
its no big deal...

something is a miss
I hate this part
that first thrown fist
made me smart...

Something is gone
the pain still here
lay awake until dawn
and shed my last tear...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 12, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Free Byrd, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)
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August 30, 2015 at 2:52 PM
Free, Great piece to read today, Well done ~SKAT~
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January 17, 2013 at 2:56 PM
Sounds like you've learned from your mistake...writing has a tendency to bring things into perspective...good write.
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