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Something Like

Something like bliss
I love this part
that sweet first kiss
was Cupid's dart...

Something like a dream
yet the pain is real
we let off steam
its no big deal...

something is a miss
I hate this part
that first thrown fist
made me smart...

Something is gone
the pain still here
lay awake until dawn
and shed my last tear...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/12/2016 12:28:00 PM
Free Byrd, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)
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Date: 8/30/2015 2:52:00 PM
Free, Great piece to read today, Well done ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/17/2013 2:56:00 PM
Sounds like you've learned from your mistake...writing has a tendency to bring things into perspective...good write.
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