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Something Gaurds These Waters

"I shall let you pass" Says the kind waterfall Troll (Few are found worthy) ***Inspired by Raul's "Waterfall" picture

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 3:50:00 PM

Lol, cute to think of this

James Fraser

Date: 10/11/2009 1:26:00 PM

Kool Haiku Tim, it's certainly a different take on the picture, all the best in Raul's contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/11/2009 5:51:00 AM

Very imaginative take on the photo! We find all sorts of things near waterfalls, don't we? This poem almost seems like something out of JRR Tolkein's series (Hobbit, Lord of the Rings, etc.). Mail for you shortly. Love, Carolyn

Date: 10/10/2009 8:38:00 PM

Thought provoking poem. Interesting last line. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Donna Golden

Date: 10/10/2009 8:21:00 PM

Oooh! Chilling contribution to the contest! I like the creative spin. Way to think outside the box! Hugs, Donna. P.S. Ding!

Marty Owens

Date: 10/10/2009 7:13:00 PM

I knew I saw a Troll in that picture. lol I love this.. good luck in the contest..Marty