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Something For the Emotionally Daft

Me and my friend Spider went out for a spin in a glider. We stopped off for crisps and cider, then off to the shops where I bought him some tops and four pairs of shoes for a fiver

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Barry Stebbings

Date: 10/24/2016 10:04:00 AM

Hello David, welcome to poetry soup. I like this, my type of humour. // Barry

Patricia Lawton

Date: 10/19/2016 10:03:00 AM

Hi David and welcome to poetrysoup. I'm liking your style because I write poems similar for kids mainly. Hey they don't come much dafter than me. Big hug welcome to you.x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/19/2016 1:10:00 AM

Good to say, David, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 10/18/2016 11:29:00 PM

DAVID, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT