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Something Fishy

When I awoke, I found I was in a different land stood amongst trees and flowers made of sand still holding the tv Tuna in my hand. I walked in through the Crabs side door and Floundered, couldn't feel my feet any more they had gone from right under my nose Why they were there in the first Plaice? Who knows? The Crab wasn't home, so I left him a note with no pen or paper, you may ask how was it wrote? ahh, well, that's none of your business but all the Fish know how it is. Through the window, I see horses, oh Seahorses Something sparked and made me squeal I just trod on an Electric Eel A smile Bream-ed wide across my face as I plugged in my double Bass rockin' out with Squid and George Martin having a party in the Octopus' garden. Oh such a happy place to be, below the waves and under the sea! ©John-Ovan.P.Hull

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/10/2012 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest John-. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2012 6:25:00 PM
wow, this is the most UNIQUE and imaginative one I think I have seen so far. It deserves to be much higher on the list. Big congrats. I am glad I got to see it finally.
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Date: 4/6/2012 5:01:00 AM
Nice , congratulations John xx
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:44:00 AM
congrats John on a fantastic write and excellent win for this marvelous poem luv.. enjoy happy easter blessings too..
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Date: 4/5/2012 4:17:00 PM
Lot of good creative stuff in this poem. Enjoyed!! Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting my contest. love, gautami
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Date: 1/11/2012 9:38:00 AM
OOOH THE WAVES...U CAN FEEL THEM HERE IN SINGAPORE...WITH CRABS AND OCTOPUS..AND OFCOURSE SEAHORSES...LOVED THE RHYTHM HERE ,,I LOVED THAT NONE OF UR BUSINESS PART...LOL
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