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Something Bigger Than Myself

Each day before dawn gazing up at the stars I truly hope to see if somewhere in the Universe a morning gift was left for me to restore my equilibrium from a restless painful night then as I look to my delight I spy my morning feast for the Cosmos sent its brightest star; she twinkles up above her name is Venus and just for me she wears her sparkling gown I adore her dazzling beauty as she takes away my breath The Sun is waiting in the wings to bring light to our day and like a trumpet serenade the skies will celebrate her rising in the east the sky prepares her morning overtures with a kaleidoscope of colours to infuse the daybreak sky hues of crimson, orange, vermilion are painted from an artiste’s palette as dramatically she makes her entrance; a shimmering golden orb Then finally at the end of her day she creates an impressive finale a cornucopia of her most vivid colours lights up the evening sky as wispy dancing clouds float by to soak up her vibrant hues then slowly she reclines to bed to view the biggest show of all This show is always different on each twenty eight day run a celebratory performance from iconic Mother Moon such a captivating sight to see this shimmering silver spherical globe she truly is my favorite and of her I am in awe I gaze at her for hours for she truly stole my heart she lifts my spirit she calms my soul she enlightens my life she is something bigger than myself Written 29th January 2019 Contest: Something Bigger Than Myself Sponsor: Line Gauthier 3rd place in this Premier Contest HONORABLE MENTION Contest YOUR CHOICE 7 any form, any theme Sponsor Brian Strand

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Date: 2/7/2019 12:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful poem, Ann.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2019 8:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Line for my 3rd place in your contest, I am thrilled! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/7/2019 5:40:00 AM
Ann, I started to highlight my most favorite parts of your lovely lovely poem. The imagery was popping off the page, and into my mind, flowing so beautifully. I finally realized I had highlighted everything, so I put it onto my FAV list. It is ALL my favorite part.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/7/2019 6:27:00 AM
Wow, thank you so much Caren, that is such a compliment, thank you! I spend a great of time gazing skywards it feeds my soul, but boy does it give me a neck ache! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/29/2019 5:54:00 PM
Excellent poem. Beautifully written. I enjoyed this :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/30/2019 2:15:00 AM
Many thanks Heidi so glad you enjoyed it and thanks for your lovely comments. This morning a beautful gift awaited as just before 7 am from my balcony I could see a crescent moon, jupiter and venus all very close together - wow, what more can I say! Kindest thoughts Heidi, wishing you a joyous day, Ann xx

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