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Something Amiss

My life is always in a mess, Something must be amiss, I'm not living the ordinary, Things happening contrary, It all began when I was young, A better life I always yearn, Nothing seem to add up, All my life is ed d up. Left right and center, Every place I enter, All I get is a blow, When will my star glow, I'm now fit to be independent, But I still remains dependent, I cant tell where I went wrong, My days and nights too long, Where there's a will there's away, Dear God let your will be done your way, Let this not happen to any other, Neither should I see another. @Tha Formidable Cheru. #themonk.

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Date: 3/19/2023 3:59:00 AM
Your heartfelt poem is a brave expression of the struggles you've faced. Remember that you're not alone and there's always hope for a way forward. Keep writing and may your journey lead you to peace and fulfillment. Good work!
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