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Something About Love

Will you destroy my castle? Will you break apart my dream? Could you end this fairytale? Could you tear apart these seams? I tried so hard to pull that all together, now you come along and ruin my forever. Can you say you feel happy? Can you say you were right? Did you think I would just let you? Did you not think I would fight? I'm not letting him slip away from me I wont let him go for, I love him with all of me.

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Date: 5/22/2009 9:48:00 AM
The repetition reinforces in theme in this poem. It's also quite expressive of a person speaking his/or mind. This is a form of reality. Great job! ~Joseph
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