Jessica Arteaga Poet Free verse

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yOur telling me I'm gOing crazy
but dOn't you think this a i r ' s amazing

yOu lOOk at me as if I'm gOing u
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but I'm enjoying all this WONDER

yOu stOpped believing in your life
yOu hesitate the mOrning strife
yOu ignOre all the if's and maybe's
yOu just believe that lOve is p a c i n g

I like the feel of earth unstill
I like to feel the when will; chill
I like to knOw that I know nOthing
Instead Of lOOking fOr that sOmething...

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Jslambert Mister Roboto March 9, 2011 at 11:32 PM Under...Sweet! Nice placement and spacement, 'specially puttin' under in the BASEMENT! WuRD! ~JS Lambert

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 11, 2010 at 1:12 AM Hi Jessica :) this is a cool write, especially enjoyed how you formatted the word "under"-- as well as the spaces in pacing-- wonderful way of thinking as well, I could relate -- & haha you are funny for a while there I thought you were writing (my name's been rhymed with biko as well, a type of rice cake here) a poem for the Name Game song-- ;) you could I think you'd do great with it! enjoy your day!! -- nikko :)

Ryan Emerald August 10, 2010 at 2:48 PM awsome poem indeed I love the way you word it out in general

Dakarai Cobb August 10, 2010 at 9:11 AM enjoyed this very creative poem. thank you for sharing it with us. i liked the spacing in between p a c i n g for effect.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 9, 2010 at 11:44 AM I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Jessica. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 9, 2010 at 7:18 AM Unique and creative Jessica.. your words speak volumes in this piece.. and the accent with the caps is defining.. great piece my friend.. happy week with luv..

Sarah Hales August 9, 2010 at 2:11 AM Great write x sarah x

John Rhinem August 9, 2010 at 1:09 AM Ps. Smile ~ I hope that "You" didn't mind all of my "YOU"'s but, I felt a tad bit crazy tonight, thinking about "YoOoUuu" ~ Smile, "Beautiful Dreams to 'You, Beautiful Jessica Arteaga;" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~

John Rhinem August 9, 2010 at 1:04 AM ~ "YOU" should already know this too; my hearts sincerest carings for "YOU" ~ I love as Always, the creativity of what "YOU" always seem to create upon these canvas' "YOU" paint dear ~ And the message amid the muse here is, "BEAUTIFUL" ~ "My Love to 'YOU ALWAYS,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Bright &, 'Somethings Beautiful Day, Dear;" Bye!:) ~

John Rhinem August 9, 2010 at 12:55 AM Smile ~ "Jessica" ~ "Beautiful Jessica" ~ "O" ~ Smile, personally dear, I am just trying to love All; while waiting for the clarity of reclaimed time; to reclaim the filling of these eyes....Smile, its Always soo good to see "YOU!!!" ~ Did I ever tell "YOU" that? Do I need to tell "YOU" that? Smile, I hope not!!! ~ So how are "YOU?" ~ Well I hope but ~ ....Cont:)