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Someone You Can'T Live Without

Love Never Lasts until You find someone You simply can not see yourself without By: Misty Leccese © November 14, 2010 I decided to try something a little different. I have always been pretty good with syllables, so this looked pretty interesting to me. I would love to have you guys feed back on this one since the style is very new to me. Thanks, Misty

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Francisco Rodriguez

Date: 5/13/2011 1:35:00 PM

I love poetry, but I am new at all of it. I do know that I like this one especially!!

Misty Penton-Leccese

Date: 11/16/2010 7:13:00 AM

Once again thanks for the welcome home. And thanks for double checking me Andrea. Lots of Love, Misty

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2010 7:24:00 PM

I really like this one, Misty. Cool last line!! I have not written many Tetracyts, but if it's 1/2/3/4/10, then you nailed it! btw (lasts instead of last) Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/15/2010 12:37:00 PM

Very true message in your insightful teractys. You chose a form that works well to express your feelings. It's nice to have you back, Misty. Welcome home! Love, Carolyn

Misty Penton-Leccese

Date: 11/14/2010 7:18:00 PM

Thank you :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/14/2010 7:06:00 PM

a sweet write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.