Misty Penton-Leccese Poet Tetractys

Someone You Can'T Live Without

Love
Never
Lasts until
You find someone
You simply can not see yourself without


By: Misty Leccese
© November 14, 2010



I decided to try something a little different. I have always been pretty good with
syllables, so this looked pretty interesting to me. I would love to have you guys feed
back on this one since the style is very new to me. Thanks, Misty

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Francisco Rodriguez May 13, 2011 at 1:35 PM I love poetry, but I am new at all of it. I do know that I like this one especially!!

Misty Penton-Leccese November 16, 2010 at 7:13 AM Once again thanks for the welcome home. And thanks for double checking me Andrea. Lots of Love, Misty

Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2010 at 7:24 PM I really like this one, Misty. Cool last line!! I have not written many Tetracyts, but if it's 1/2/3/4/10, then you nailed it! btw (lasts instead of last) Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire November 15, 2010 at 12:37 PM Very true message in your insightful teractys. You chose a form that works well to express your feelings. It's nice to have you back, Misty. Welcome home! Love, Carolyn

Misty Penton-Leccese November 14, 2010 at 7:18 PM Thank you :)

Poet Destroyer A November 14, 2010 at 7:06 PM a sweet write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.