Someone Than Myself

sorry?, yes  I’m sorry, sorry for the things I missed in life,
lonely?, yes I’m lonely, still alone without a loving wife, 

money?, yes there’s money, enough to buy the things I need,
happy?, no not happy, in happiness I did not succeed,

good?, yes I’ve been good, , but many times misunderstood,
change?, yes I could change, change my choices if I could, 

listen?, yes I would listen, listen to someone who cries,
help?, yes I would help, help to make their spirit rise,

work?, yes I have worked, worked very hard to buy a home,
now?, with all I have, with all I’ve done, I’m still alone,

hope?, yes there is hope, hope to find that someone else,
love?, yes I could love, to love some other than myself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 24, 2015 at 4:37 PM
Gabriel, that's an interesting take. . Forever **SKAT**
Magno Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 5:19 PM
Thanks - just a reflection of some of my life...
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May 24, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Nice job Gabriel. I like this one.
Magno Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 5:19 PM
Thanks Preston - some parts are of me, some of many others...
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