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Someone Than Myself

sorry?, yes I’m sorry, sorry for the things I missed in life, lonely?, yes I’m lonely, still alone without a loving wife, money?, yes there’s money, enough to buy the things I need, happy?, no not happy, in happiness I did not succeed, good?, yes I’ve been good, , but many times misunderstood, change?, yes I could change, change my choices if I could, listen?, yes I would listen, listen to someone who cries, help?, yes I would help, help to make their spirit rise, work?, yes I have worked, worked very hard to buy a home, now?, with all I have, with all I’ve done, I’m still alone, hope?, yes there is hope, hope to find that someone else, love?, yes I could love, to love some other than myself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/24/2015 4:37:00 PM
Gabriel, that's an interesting take. . Forever **SKAT**
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Gabriel Magno
Date: 5/24/2015 5:19:00 PM
Thanks - just a reflection of some of my life...
Date: 5/24/2015 4:20:00 PM
Nice job Gabriel. I like this one.
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Gabriel Magno
Date: 5/24/2015 5:19:00 PM
Thanks Preston - some parts are of me, some of many others...

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