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Someone Like You

i just want someone to hold me, love me i just want someone to touch me, kiss me to help me when i'm down someone to revere my frown i just want some one like you to kiss my tears away someone that will always stay i just want someone to tell my secrets to to whisper at night and t say i love you i just want someone to always be their to hold my hand anywhere i just want someone like you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/9/2011 9:15:00 PM
Great poem! We all feel that way sometimes and it's wonderful that you were able to put your thoughts into rhyme :) P.S. If you don't know your poem form, look it up- Poetry Soup provides awesome resources to help you identify your poem form.. oh, and if it rhymes- when in doubt just call it rhyme :) Love, J.
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Date: 12/9/2011 5:25:00 AM
Good morning and welcome to PoetrySoup Jessica. Enjoyed reading your poetry. Love, Carol
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