Sajdah Al-Riyami Poet Blank verse

Someday(Was My First Poem Here-And This Is the Recent Version)

Blue cresents pouring down
Yellow beams roll around
Heavenly whispers enter these ears
Screams and cry heard ,we fear

We might be thousand miles far
But still hear the suicide bomb car
Exploding to put millions to death
Someday-it will all end

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Charmaine Chircop September 18, 2009 at 6:37 PM i really hope we live to see peace,but hope is the next step to fear,and fear is all i have when i watch whts happenning around the world--Someday--love this poem--Charma

Jay Loveless September 10, 2009 at 11:23 AM ohmigawd 0.0 i love it hugs kisses xoxo i miss you loves brillant poem, i sure hope it ends, and soon!! PS I DIDNT GET INTO HERSHEY

Michael Jordan August 30, 2009 at 4:16 AM Sajdah this is a very deep and meaningful poem that truly touches on an amazing thing that I just can't grasp a hold of - The faith these people display regardless of how tragic truly amazes me - hopefully it will end and we can all live in some sort of harmony - God Bless, mj

Sara Kendrick August 29, 2009 at 2:24 PM It is sad that someone can hate so much. Interesting thoughts put to pen a a very good way. Keep writing. Sara