Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Someday the Dawn

Here on a lake formed of nature’s creation,
tucked away deep in the hills
Nary a footprint along sculpted shorelines,
visions to capture the thrills

Silent reflections of all that’s surrounding,
still are the waters this morn
Sunlight invades through the meeting of mountains,
as a new day now is born

Taking a seat at the edge of the waters,
skipping a flat rock to see
Ripples of wonder in circular motion,
waving good morning to me

Now as I breathe in the air so alluring,
scented of pines ever tall
Reaching the heavens in silhouette wishes,
echoes enchanting the call

Nothing shall find me alone of this moment,
lost on the pathways I chart
For in the distance I know that she loves me,
I feel her love in my heart

Someday the dawn it shall bring us together,
here in this setting so free
For of this beauty so wondrously offered, 
she is all I long to see

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Alexis Y. November 9, 2016 at 10:54 AM Hi Chris, This is so beautiful. You captured the feeling of some one longing for their lover very well. The imagery is just breathtaking. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis Chris Green November 9, 2016 at 5:05 PM Alexis, I always smile when you come to visit my poetry. Your kind words are always such a wonderful moment for me. Thank you so much my friend.

John Lawless November 9, 2016 at 10:37 AM Beauty can only be obscured by greater beauty....and love.....you captured a lovely moment of natural beauty and then wrapped it in the longing of love's beauty. Well cone Chris. Chris Green November 9, 2016 at 5:04 PM Thanks so very much John, I am glad you enjoyed this one and left such nice comments for me.

Paloma P November 9, 2016 at 10:16 AM Enchanting imagery, abounding nature, love's nectar, beauty that surrounds us, outstanding Chris! Chris Green November 9, 2016 at 5:03 PM Thank you Paloma for your kind thoughts on my poem. I am more than happy you enjoyed this heart longing little stroll through nature.

Charmaine Chircop November 9, 2016 at 8:23 AM Long distance love...so it seems...You should send her this poem in a postcard..Lovely...indeed. Chris Green November 9, 2016 at 8:49 AM I might just do that. :) Thank you Charmaine for visiting this lake scene with me today. I appreciate your kindness so much.

Tim Smith November 9, 2016 at 8:03 AM A wondrous sight youve painted Chris. If only she was there with you. Chris Green November 9, 2016 at 8:49 AM If only...if I had a dollar for every time I said that I'd be...at the lake instead of at work. :) Thanks so much Tim for your always kind words.

Heidi Sands November 9, 2016 at 7:25 AM I have found myself another favorite. Just unbelievable, I was at a lake yesterday, exactly like this poem. You have written this with such good imagery and portrayal of feelings. I love the skipping rock lines!! :) Chris Green November 9, 2016 at 8:48 AM Good morning Heidi...wow, that is so cool. Then I guess I will dedicate this poem to you. Because I was just daydreaming but you were actually there. Thank you so much for everything my poetic friend.

Joanna Daniel November 9, 2016 at 6:56 AM I got an idea, I'm gonna give another 7:) Chris Green November 9, 2016 at 8:44 AM I love that, thank you Jo. That really made me smile this morning (along with your comment below) I appreciate you my friend. I am so thrilled you enjoyed this poem. It is people like you who refill the ink in my pen with your wonderful thoughts.

Joanna Daniel November 9, 2016 at 6:55 AM Oh, wow, an absolute favourite, Chris:) and a 10:) wish I could really rate this 10, than just the 7 that PS offers:( you are an amazing writer, Chris:) Chris Green November 9, 2016 at 8:44 AM See above. :)