Someday She'D Be a Swan

She stood alone in the decorated gym
Waiting with hope and fear
Her very best friend was dancing with him
Still she dreamed of holding him near

She wouldn't care if he made a pass
Even though she was quite shy
She thought of him in every class
But she was too young to know why

The angst and agony of being a teen
Was quite evident tonight
She knew very well she had been seen
But all she got was a slight

To be the last one picked to dance
Was awful beyond measure
And here she was in that circumstance
Even though she was a treasure

On her the boys did take a pass
She was thought of as a geek
Remarks were made so crude and crass
But she turned the other cheek

She'd wait till she got home to cry
Wouldn't let them see her tears
To her mama she'd wail"why oh why?"
And tell her of all her fears

Some day this girl would be a queen
And admired for her mind
Until then she'd just be another teen
Living through things unkind





**for Paula Swanson's contest "Pass"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 4:48 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in Paula Swanson's contest "Pass". Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Deb, This is a picture of truth time and time again..Congratulations on your fantastic win in Paula's Contest. Enjoy
Gorelick Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 7:45 AM
congrats on your win in the contest..I can relate to this piece..although I never quite got to queen...lol..BG
Mehta Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 5:16 AM
Contratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Deb
Sweetheart Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 4:56 AM
Congrats Deb on your big win in the Pass contest.. enjoy this super Sunday with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 11:11 PM
I really enjoyed your entry into the contest, Deb. I remember well these days wishing a guy would make a pass at me too! But the one wished for was not usually the one who did it! haha. LUv, Andrea
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October 2, 2010 at 6:23 PM
enjoyed reading today... have a great lords day!
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 5:09 PM
Very unique presentation for the contest, Good luck, Deb
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