Someday

When I open my eyes
I catch a glimpse of you
I don't know you 
I know nothing about you
But every time I see you
There's something deep inside me
telling me...
of this strange feeling..

Oh how I hate this feeling!
Too afraid for this to grow, each and everyday
I don't want it
so I continue ignoring it...

But somehow...
hoping.. wishing..
that you feel the same way too
somehow.. someday..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/29/2010 7:17:00 PM
thank you all who appreciated my poems..enjoy reading..and thanks for welcoming me!
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Date: 9/28/2010 1:19:00 PM
Like you said Charmane, someday, enjoyed the poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/28/2010 12:15:00 PM
yes it's hard to love & trust. Good luck! Light & Love
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:42:00 PM
Nice crreative and passionate write on feelings of love, charmane
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:36:00 PM
Ps. Smile ~ "Beautiful Poem, With 'A Very Beautiful Thought;' Keep Writing!!!'" ~
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:33:00 PM
Smile ~ I really like "Your" title but, I love "Your Precious & Beautiful Name; 'Charmane; How Very Very Lovely!!!'" ~ As a matter of fact, it makes myself think of "A Beautiful Lady & Astonishing Poetess" which I need to go visit real quick ~ Smile, I believe I shall add "Your Beauty" to my fave poes, just because of "Your Beautiful Name!!!" ~ Nice to read "You" dear &, hopefully I shall see "You" again ~ "Love Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Dear Charmane;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:26:00 PM
A pleasure to read your creative poetry today Charmane. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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