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Someday

When I open my eyes I catch a glimpse of you I don't know you I know nothing about you But every time I see you There's something deep inside me telling me... of this strange feeling.. Oh how I hate this feeling! Too afraid for this to grow, each and everyday I don't want it so I continue ignoring it... But somehow... hoping.. wishing.. that you feel the same way too somehow.. someday..

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Charmane Bellen

Date: 9/29/2010 7:17:00 PM

thank you all who appreciated my poems..enjoy reading..and thanks for welcoming me!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2010 1:19:00 PM

Like you said Charmane, someday, enjoyed the poem,..p.d.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/28/2010 12:15:00 PM

yes it's hard to love & trust. Good luck! Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/27/2010 1:42:00 PM

Nice crreative and passionate write on feelings of love, charmane

John Rhinem

Date: 9/27/2010 12:36:00 PM

Ps. Smile ~ "Beautiful Poem, With 'A Very Beautiful Thought;' Keep Writing!!!'" ~

John Rhinem

Date: 9/27/2010 12:33:00 PM

Smile ~ I really like "Your" title but, I love "Your Precious & Beautiful Name; 'Charmane; How Very Very Lovely!!!'" ~ As a matter of fact, it makes myself think of "A Beautiful Lady & Astonishing Poetess" which I need to go visit real quick ~ Smile, I believe I shall add "Your Beauty" to my fave poes, just because of "Your Beautiful Name!!!" ~ Nice to read "You" dear &, hopefully I shall see "You" again ~ "Love Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Dear Charmane;" Bye!:) ~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 12:26:00 PM

A pleasure to read your creative poetry today Charmane. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol