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Someday

Upon your air her breathe astrays She lies beyond your waking sun You move along her every walk She is your bullet in a gun Her happiness;your ending and start Your every living beat The unknowing,your drumming heart Someday-You meet

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Hyle Chu

Date: 6/25/2009 2:17:00 PM

I'm a "But Not For Me" type, but the closest thing I had was a promise that "Someday" represents. It's a real Cheerful Pollyanna. I'll hold back my bananna. Maybe someday will come.

Date: 6/19/2009 3:56:00 PM

Interesting perspective in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 6/18/2009 11:48:00 PM

Congratulations and best wishes. More power and success. Ernilando

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/15/2009 8:58:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS--CHARMA

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/15/2009 6:54:00 AM

Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/15/2009 6:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sajdah. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

Date: 6/15/2009 5:10:00 AM

Sajdah,...awesome poem ! congrats on its feature this week ! james

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/15/2009 5:00:00 AM

Congratulations Sajdah on "Someday" being featured. Vince

Michael Jordan

Date: 6/14/2009 11:01:00 PM

Sajadh - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/12/2009 3:29:00 PM

I pray I do, my friend, congratulations on your maiden poem here, I may be late but I stay the trip. Blessings and peace.

John Anusie

Date: 6/10/2009 8:58:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL DISTICH. Much enamoured of that poem. Thanks for commenting on mine.

Jay Loveless

Date: 6/8/2009 10:21:00 AM

Wow. This Is Pretty Sweet. I Love Your Words!

Seventeen Dowdell

Date: 6/8/2009 6:55:00 AM

That was fantastic. A beutiful way to show how love can still be found

Clifton Mwangi

Date: 5/29/2009 11:54:00 AM

Love the sudden end and its faith. Thanks alot for your comment.

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/26/2009 1:53:00 PM

Destiny in companionship, we all need to find somebody to watch for pigs on the wing along with us jojjo nice one, very sweet, thanks for sharing wiii =D=D=D sky-diving lines

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/18/2009 8:29:00 AM

Beautiful poem.