Sajdah Al-Riyami Poet Blank verse

Someday

Upon your air her breathe astrays
She lies beyond your waking sun
You move along her every walk
She is your bullet in a gun

Her happiness;your ending and start
Your every living beat
The unknowing,your drumming heart
Someday-You meet

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Hyle Chu June 25, 2009 at 2:17 PM I'm a "But Not For Me" type, but the closest thing I had was a promise that "Someday" represents. It's a real Cheerful Pollyanna. I'll hold back my bananna. Maybe someday will come.

June 19, 2009 at 3:56 PM Interesting perspective in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Ernilando Tugaff June 18, 2009 at 11:48 PM Congratulations and best wishes. More power and success. Ernilando

Charmaine Chircop June 15, 2009 at 8:58 AM CONGRATULATIONS--CHARMA

Adeleke Adeite June 15, 2009 at 6:54 AM Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke

Carol Sunshine Brown June 15, 2009 at 6:39 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sajdah. Love, Carol

James Peranteau June 15, 2009 at 5:10 AM Sajdah,...awesome poem ! congrats on its feature this week ! james

Vince Suzadail Jr. June 15, 2009 at 5:00 AM Congratulations Sajdah on "Someday" being featured. Vince

Michael Jordan June 14, 2009 at 11:01 PM Sajadh - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ

L'Nass Shango June 12, 2009 at 3:29 PM I pray I do, my friend, congratulations on your maiden poem here, I may be late but I stay the trip. Blessings and peace.

John Anusie June 10, 2009 at 8:58 AM BEAUTIFUL DISTICH. Much enamoured of that poem. Thanks for commenting on mine.

Jay Loveless June 8, 2009 at 10:21 AM Wow. This Is Pretty Sweet. I Love Your Words!

Seventeen Dowdell June 8, 2009 at 6:55 AM That was fantastic. A beutiful way to show how love can still be found

Clifton Mwangi May 29, 2009 at 11:54 AM Love the sudden end and its faith. Thanks alot for your comment.

Cesar Cantu May 26, 2009 at 1:53 PM Destiny in companionship, we all need to find somebody to watch for pigs on the wing along with us jojjo nice one, very sweet, thanks for sharing wiii =D=D=D sky-diving lines

Nadia Shahwan May 18, 2009 at 8:29 AM Beautiful poem.