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Someday

Upon your air her breathe astrays
She lies beyond your waking sun
You move along her every walk
She is your bullet in a gun

Her happiness;your ending and start
Your every living beat
The unknowing,your drumming heart
Someday-You meet

Copyright © Sajdah Al-Riyami | Year Posted 2009

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Hyle Chu Date: 6/25/2009 2:17:00 PM I'm a "But Not For Me" type, but the closest thing I had was a promise that "Someday" represents. It's a real Cheerful Pollyanna. I'll hold back my bananna. Maybe someday will come. Login to Reply

Date: 6/19/2009 3:56:00 PM Interesting perspective in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen Login to Reply

Ernilando Tugaff Date: 6/18/2009 11:48:00 PM Congratulations and best wishes. More power and success. Ernilando Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 6/15/2009 8:58:00 AM CONGRATULATIONS--CHARMA Login to Reply

Adeleke Adeite Date: 6/15/2009 6:54:00 AM Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/15/2009 6:39:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sajdah. Love, Carol Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 6/15/2009 5:10:00 AM Sajdah,...awesome poem ! congrats on its feature this week ! james Login to Reply

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 6/15/2009 5:00:00 AM Congratulations Sajdah on "Someday" being featured. Vince Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 6/14/2009 11:01:00 PM Sajadh - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ Login to Reply

L'Nass Shango Date: 6/12/2009 3:29:00 PM I pray I do, my friend, congratulations on your maiden poem here, I may be late but I stay the trip. Blessings and peace. Login to Reply

John Anusie Date: 6/10/2009 8:58:00 AM BEAUTIFUL DISTICH. Much enamoured of that poem. Thanks for commenting on mine. Login to Reply

Jay Loveless Date: 6/8/2009 10:21:00 AM Wow. This Is Pretty Sweet. I Love Your Words! Login to Reply

Seventeen Dowdell Date: 6/8/2009 6:55:00 AM That was fantastic. A beutiful way to show how love can still be found Login to Reply

Clifton Mwangi Date: 5/29/2009 11:54:00 AM Love the sudden end and its faith. Thanks alot for your comment. Login to Reply

Cesar Cantu Date: 5/26/2009 1:53:00 PM Destiny in companionship, we all need to find somebody to watch for pigs on the wing along with us jojjo nice one, very sweet, thanks for sharing wiii =D=D=D sky-diving lines Login to Reply

Nadia Shahwan Date: 5/18/2009 8:29:00 AM Beautiful poem. Login to Reply