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Some Where Out There

Some where out there my heart is beating, some where out of reach, but being half way makes me complete. Some where out there your heart is beating to me. I believe that your gonna be right there, next to me some day. I can be real and I cant be fake but most of all I'm me, I'm not fake and I'm not pretending to be someone else. I'm "real" and my heart beats some where out there for you. I'm incomplete with out your heart beating right next to my heart. When we find each other we will be living, and loving eachother side by side with two hearts beating next to eachother as one heart beat. Smiling at each other side by side blooming like wild flowers in a meadow running free side by side each other. Some where out there where thinking about what each others doing this very moment. Now the moon has set and the stars are shinning bright but some where out there I know some how were both looking at the same moon and the same bright stars some where out there, will be together again.

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Date: 9/4/2016 3:01:00 PM
A lovely first offering. Welcome to the soup.
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Date: 8/9/2016 12:36:00 AM
Julie,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 8/7/2016 9:54:00 AM
You always have been good hun. Keep it up, hope to read more soon.... Signed, Tera
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Date: 8/6/2016 12:00:00 PM
This is splendid and excellent. You have indeed started superbly. Welcome to poetry soup dear one and I hope you enjoy showing your skill and talent here.
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Date: 8/6/2016 11:27:00 AM
Julie, So nice to review your mail. You are So so, so sweet . Flourishing wishes... your soup mail, was rather nice and fast. I'm replying here, because you have your notification off. Enjoy and conquer this site ... hugs and love... Linda
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Date: 8/6/2016 11:18:00 AM
Julie, you have conquered this site joining spot on Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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