Some Thing Good, Some Thing Bad.

I feel as if death is apon me,
Usually I woulden't  be so scared,
But, there also a very good feeling,

I'm scared as if my life will end tonight,
I don't want it to,
Cause tomarrow, or maybe just this week,
Will be great... I hope!

Some where,
Some time soon...
I will be happy, no matter what it is,
It's a great feeling.

But why tonight,
I can't sleep,
I know death is watching,
Watching my ever move.

Why tonight.
The first night, that i can't wait.
Can't wait to keep living.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Agustin Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 6:29 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Rose Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 7:33 AM
I have felt just like this. You will be okay.
A   Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 11:54 PM
Shaye, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 6:50 PM
this is a great poem. SKAT
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