Some Say

Some people doubt that I slow enough to rest
     Tell me to stop, to enjoy what I have created 
          But,       don’t you see me here?
               Sitting and breathing in my garden

Someone told me lately that they think
     I like chaos and calamity to be absorbed,
          to thrive but I don’t know why they think that
                when order keeps me safely grounded

A friend said they noticed I like to find solutions
     And this is so true to my very character
          Also, I’ve learned to put chores in mind boxes
               To be ready tomorrow when the next box is opened

And some say my day is mostly organized
     Into needs of future goals right beside today’s chosen fun
          Swirled inside these seams are ripples of challenges
               Exasperation that my plans melt in others open palms

Just breath with the garden or go to the beach
     Amazing but fifteen minutes, an hour, a day really can
          refresh my page with newfound energy or clarity
               some say when the day is done, gratitude is not just a word
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Callus Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 4:49 AM
People often go by what they see on the outside, while neglecting what lies on the inside. Getting to know others better brings understanding. ~ Best regards // paul
Horsman Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:11 PM
What an amazing poem, this is Jeanne. Yes gratitude is not just a word, but a feeling, one so intense at times.
Mcgee Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 5:04 AM
Thank you Harry! I'm so very thankful for the life I've been able to live, the lessons I've learned and those I am still learning...and being here on the Soup with all of you guys!
Mcgee Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 1:04 PM
Hi John...it sounds like I would say you have felt some of these things yourself...I do try to listen to what my friends say as their advise can save the day but in the end, what my heart says is pure. Thanks for the comments...and thank you!
Watt Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 12:27 PM
Some say you have an artistic eye and a poet's soul, and I am one of those people! I love how you frame your bio poem as an interplay between what "some say" and what you know in your heart. I appreciate the transparency, Jeanne, along with the sage advice to slowly breathe in the garden or beach air for a reset and filter everything through a heart of gratitude. So wonderful to read these words today ~ John
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 2:55 PM
Great advice Jeanne. I believe that taking time for yourself helps one to be inspired to help others. We all need down time to care for ourselves. Those who constantly give lose their balance and become ill. Blessings xxoo
Mcintosh Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 3:37 AM
Wonderful writing. Love it. God bless you always friend. Love, Gina
Mcgee Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Hi there miss Gina. Thanks for the stop by and comments...so nice to see a friend of PS again...
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