Some Poets Use Flowery Words

Many poets write glorious imagery using flowery words
only three people know
two of them dead
one being Coleridge
the other Shakespeare
I hate them for knowing these words,
despise their guts out that they know how to implement them correctly.
I comment, knowing my comments are crude, banal, a joke at my expense.
These poets are too gracious to call me out.
They pretend that my words are suitable.
Luckily this sooths my pain
and helps me to not feel the need
to look up all of their words which I do not know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Duet Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 2:29 AM
LOL...I'm with you, Caren. I'm always having to look up some words from the poems here. However, I just consider it educational though I much prefer simplicity. By-the-way, have you read my poem called, "My Word Diet"? Carole :D
Krutsinger Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 8:42 PM
I am heading over there now Carole. By the way the e at the end of Carole is fancy elegant.
Bauer Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 10:04 AM
you made me laugh, caren! thanks for that!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 10:59 AM
Thank you Ilene
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 6:56 AM
lol Caren my favourite poetic word is xanthic otherwise i use bog standard language everyone can understand. I cant be doing with the poetry snobs who try to show their superiority by swallowing a dictionary and writing a poem only they understand:-) hugs jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 11:00 AM
NowI have to look up xanthic dhramn it!
Andresen Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 5:42 AM
... true .... :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 11:00 AM
I am so glad so many others relate to this.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 5:28 AM
Giggles!!! ;D,
Krutsinger Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 11:03 AM
Thanks Mo
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 3:35 AM
Too many difficult words don’t help! Sometimes I include a definition if it is a word that others might not know. xx
Krutsinger Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 11:03 AM
I use common words because I am simple.
Ermine Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Words! Mere words! Used sometimes as walls or stumbling blocks to communication. With a new partner I had fourteen years ago, I'd literally have my dictionary busily flipping in front of me during our phone conversations!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 11:04 AM
I bet that was fun for you!
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