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Some More Spider Plant Verses

~ coral sunset warm mother's fish curry ~ attic childhood memories dusted ~ if petrichor were petaled jasmine-scented night ~ broken cistern wafer-thin heart ~ fast city life smoky haze ~ 23rd March 2023

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/25/2023 11:05:00 AM

WoW! Jo, You did a good job with this form( I never heard of this form, I looked on the contest page). Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/25/2023 10:32:00 AM

Jo, this was an interesting poem to read. Although I have never tried this form before, it appears to be appealing. Good luck with the contest

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/25/2023 8:05:00 AM

These are really great, Joanna. My favorite is the second one, however I have never tasted your mother's fish curry:)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/25/2023 7:54:00 AM

Great string of bantu, a form I'd never heard of. Enjoy your weekend Joanna. Tom