Some More Spider Plant Verses

~ coral sunset warm mother's fish curry ~ attic childhood memories dusted ~ if petrichor were petaled jasmine-scented night ~ broken cistern wafer-thin heart ~ fast city life smoky haze ~
23rd March 2023
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March 25, 2023 at 11:05 AM
WoW! Jo, You did a good job with this form( I never heard of this form, I looked on the contest page). Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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March 25, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Jo, this was an interesting poem to read. Although I have never tried this form before, it appears to be appealing. Good luck with the contest
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March 25, 2023 at 8:05 AM
These are really great, Joanna. My favorite is the second one, however I have never tasted your mother's fish curry:)
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March 25, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Great string of bantu, a form I'd never heard of. Enjoy your weekend Joanna. Tom
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