some fries and a soda


She wore a pink ribbon, her chocolate hair flowing, a dress of the summertime kind The morning was waiting, she longed to be sharing, the things rolling round in her mind She waved to a daisy, in Mister Green's garden, the wind down the avenue blew Her smile like springtime, with daffodils dancing, it seemed like a fun thing to do She spun in a circle, like leaves from the oak tree, when fall sent them off to the ground A butterfly followed, past barbershop checkers, she was the best friend it had found A nice early Thursday, with lilac aromas, though one thing was missing its part She longed for the romance, she read in a novel, a big empty hole in her heart When there on the sidewalk, her shadow did mingle, he stood with his bubblegum blown It popped, oh so sticky, she couldn't help laughing, she wished he was someone she'd known He looked at her beauty and laughed along with her, his dimples sent her pulse a 'spin He asked, "Can I buy you, some fries and a soda, right here at the Sunflower Inn?" She noticed the postman, he winked and he nodded, her smile she just could not hide She said, "I would like that," he held the door open, the two of them then went inside The rest of this poem, has a happy ending, I know that this statement is true These two, they just passed me, while strolling the sidewalk, when I heard him say, "I love you."
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Date: 5/27/2025 9:49:00 PM
Magnificent storytelling, Chris. I couldn't wait to read each stanza. Yet I lingered long on the memorable phrases of the last one and the feelings they evoked in me. A FAVE for me!... Sometimes I want to shout to the Poetry Soup world: "Wake up, guys. We have a remarkable poet you all should read! His name is Chris Green." But you and I are in the wrong politically, not gender-confused, etc. etc. So, what's the use? Thanks again for a great read, Chris. ~ Former Tough Guy, gw
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Chris Green
Date: 5/28/2025 6:05:00 AM
Ha, thanks my friend. I appreciate the smile you brought to me this morning with this very nice comment on my little poem. Yep, I'm a sucker for a happy little love story too. Glad you stopped by.
Date: 5/19/2025 8:52:00 AM
Wow! This dude falls in love faster than James T. Kirk. Let's hope for a happy ending and a black Angus steak dinner on their first anniversary. Nice write Chris
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/19/2025 9:08:00 AM
Picard was pretty conservative. Now Riker on the other hand...
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Chris Green
Date: 5/19/2025 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Tom. Good thing it wasn't Picard or he would have said "Engage!" by now. : )
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