Some Friendly Advice

Some friendly advice I'd like to share Don't live in the past, you're no longer there Concentrate on what's ahead On a happier future instead The choice is yours, traveling life's thoroughfare
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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Hello Jack, lots of good wisdom written here. I will put this into my special note book to reread as many times as needed. have a nice day my friend. xxx-ooo
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 2:17 PM
xxxx-oooto you to .
Ellison Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 3:36 PM
WOW!!! Nice to know there are peeps out there that still believe in love and happy stuff!!! Let's all rise up and show the world the way!!! LOL Love you dearest DDB!!! Happy Jack xoxox
One Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 11:31 AM
Seee I was nice there... :)))
Ellison Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 11:45 AM
EXTREMELY!!!!!!!!!!
One Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Jack lost his funny, world was full of cries, so decided to go back to being wise. Thought he'd write about peace, well wonders never do cease, at 82 won the nobel peace prize!!!!
Ellison Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 11:44 AM
That's not such a stretch!!!! Well... maybe a little! Maybe you could vote a bunch of times dressed up as British royalty or a rock star!!! Whatcha think??? Glad to help out a friend!!!
One Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 11:27 AM
Great advice my wise friend.
Ellison Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Not just another pretty face you know!!!!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Wise eloquence my friend! xomo
Ellison Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 8:31 AM
I;m just full of it!!! LOL xoxox
Cunningham Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 6:47 AM
There was a man called Jack/ Who looked ahead and not back/ And forward he went / Till his money was spent / And life experience he don't lack./ Sound advice though Jack.
Ellison Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 7:18 AM
A limerick first class! I bow!!! lol
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