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Some Folks Choose To Insult

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First try at a mono-rhyme with a 10/8 syllable count.

 

Yes, you’re able to blame, able to swear, To insult, to shame and to slight. Some people think this is how to live life, Turn everything into a fight. One teen I know, always asks for a hand, Then complains you’re not doing it right. Always puts you down, to put herself up, Plays the victim but’s never contrite. What happens to arrogant folks like this? Are they happy, or chip, or upright? No, they just don’t get to feel real content, Alone, making people uptight.

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Date: 6/28/2016 8:04:00 PM
A very nice poem portraying a peculiar personality ...
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Date: 6/28/2016 8:21:00 PM
Thanks Probir.

Book: Shattered Sighs